What About Me? ? Poem by Anusha Subramanian

What About Me? ?

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She shared your views,
I shared your thoughts.
She shared your happiness,
And I shared your sorrows.
She accompanied your smile,
I accompanied your tears.
And If you choose her to be your girlfriend,
What about me then? ?

She looked for the beauty in your eyes,
I looked for the love in them.
She cared for the beauty of your words,
I cared for the in-depth meaning in them.
She nurtured your lies,
I searched for the truth in them.
And If you choose her to be your girlfriend,
What about me then? ?

She walked in front of you, to lead you.
But I walked beside you, to accompany you.
Look at your past! You would realize that,
She was an illusion, and I was the reality.

And If you choose her to be your girlfriend,
What about me then? ?
And If you choose her to be your girlfriend,
You are not worth me then! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 28 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Anusha. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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lovely...you show the practical and genuine love so beautifully...and true the flow of this poem is so natural

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Lalitha iyer 17 May 2010

What about you? ? ? ? ? ? You are the priceless You are the precious You are the one whom the Gods envy for you are the life and energy the inner essence and simple beauty of life that the Creatures poorly understand and Kings rarely let pass by untouched............

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Vijay Sai R 16 May 2010

Such a flowing piece of emotion...your words speak!

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Dew Twinkle 16 May 2010

think its great, I like the last part :) hope he chose right, keep it up! ! love, Dew

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