What Is Life? Poem by Abha Sharma

What Is Life?

Rating: 3.3


Living
A breath in trance;
With
An incessant struggle;
Towards
An elfin joy;
For
An eternal hope;
Abides
A phenomenal routine;
Scrapped
A chronicle’s page;
Inspiring
Another breath in trance.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 27 May 2008

whoa, very deep 'an incessant struggle' leads its way into 'elfin joy' i like that...i like the imagery of how troubling life can be but somehow elfs are more playful and innocent, maybe a place we wish to return sometimes.

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2008

... a soul searching poem.

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Rema Prasanna 06 May 2008

Abha, I liked this poem, there is life in each line, flows beautifully, life is a breath in between one trance, good

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Deepti Agarwal 05 May 2008

Inspiring Another breath in trance. how true.... u did justice to yr well thoughts...

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Tsira Goge 28 April 2008

Abha, Yours philosophical thinking for me it is very attractive, but this the routine is expensive really... Thank you for sharing, Rindest regards, Tsira

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Deepti Agarwal 15 October 2008

Hey is LFE really like this? ? wonderful that we still have life..

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premji premji 14 August 2008

I wish life would have been like this... but in rality, it's a never ending itch!

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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008

'A breath in trance '. What do I make of this? I find this to be a more fascinating question than the one which inspired it. Perhaps, it is known in the east. In the west, there is no life or' breath in trance'. If I see a' breath in trance ', I shall tell you. That you will know that there is still life in the west. GW62

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premji premji 08 June 2008

Dear Abhaji, Well written.... Here in Cochin, everything is a mess... So I feel: Life is a neverending itch!

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Raj Nandy 29 May 2008

Beautiful thoughts expressed in beautiful lines; 10/10! - Raj Nandy 30 May 08

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