What Is This In Me...... Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

What Is This In Me......

Rating: 3.7


what is this in me
which brings out the beauty in whatever i see
what is this in me
which brings out the friend in whomever i see
what is this in me
which makes this hostile world a home to me
what is this in me
which gives me the strength to forsee a good for me
what is this in me
which keeps me connected to all life i see
what is this in me
which would'nt abandon me for whatever i be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 04 December 2008

Lovely words well written...thanks for sharing it...

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Very nice poem I love the powerful words Keep writing.. ~Krista~

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Sabrina Jubahar 05 December 2008

this a great piece. i like it a lot. it is so 'positive'! ! !

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Sallie Tompkins 08 December 2008

Beautiful work......such a great meaning of expression...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 December 2008

The poem is full of questions which are not so easy to answer

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Patti Masterman 28 September 2009

I love the different levels of existence described in here. Whatever it is, I am glad it is there in you. (smile)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 31 May 2009

You have wonderfully observed yourself from the different points. Very interesting write,10+++

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Sandra Fowler 17 May 2009

You are walking on the sunnyside of life in this one. Very positive.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Ravi A 09 May 2009

It is the radiant light that is within us which is responsible for all these aspects. We call it the eternal spirit, the eternal consciousness, the awareness. All the dimensions of purity reside here and if we miss to feel it out of life, it is only due to our gross nature of mind and nothing else. The thinner is the mind, the more reflective is the radiance of soul.

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rago rago 07 May 2009

very fine write........... thank yu for ur kind sharing.

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