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Dreams unfulfilled
Goals unreached
Success slipping through
fingers outstretched
Destiny?
or the unseen force
holding each one in place
Fret not my friend
For when the sun sets
The mystery is unlocked

Yes...
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Willis Martyn 19 July 2008

A truly spiritual poem. Great title, metaphor and philosophy. Wonderful.

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Ben Gieske 12 December 2007

Nice the way you start out with general things and then slowly zero in on the particulars coming to a satisfactory ending. The last sentence is truly a resting place - no desire to say anyting else or go beyond that.

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CU2urDream Lost 27 November 2007

very tidy writen, better simple but perfect work, thats made you a great poet, keep up the good work.

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JoAnn McGrath 19 May 2007

Bravo..I like your work.....I'll be back for more I'm sure: O)

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Marvin Brato 16 May 2007

Such poetry instills the value of home, dreams for secular satisfaction will only numb the emotional concern and moral values of a family.10 again.

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