When you love someone
You see the splendor of spring
Burst into life in the magic of his smile.
You sleep with his name in your lips
And the radiance of his face in your dreams.
You awake at the sound of his passionate voice
Whispered by the glorious dawn
And even when he’s gone
The last flickering ember of hope
Continue to light in your blistered heart
Waiting, even when the waiting is in vain
Loves electricity continues to spark, even when the lover has left. Lovely work.
' Waiting, even when the waiting is in vain ' - I wish I could learn not to do it though :)
Wow, this is an exquisite write, full of hope and love for someone... how every minute of every day, every thought evolves around that special someone... and then at the end of the poem, the reader isn't even sure that the other person even knows you exists... the poem just kind of yanks ya at the end... You've outdone yourself. I think it's your best write so far! Big hugs well done, Lee
It's really true that, if you are inlove you felt that there's never a dull moment in it. It's very True..Keep it up!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
inteligent, romantic, open, wonderful.