What Our Love Is.... Poem by Vishal Sharma

What Our Love Is....

Rating: 5.0


my eyes never sleep inside your dreams
no matter how hard i try to get inside them
you naughty smiles and heartful laughs
make me think for a while being so lucky

A twilight night
that comes with the sweetly stained perfume,
that twirls in the air
These are our rose petals that float in the wind
this is our love

our love is something that needs no description
at night when I talk to the moon, find him jealous
your eyes have the beauty of the whole world
inside your arms i get what people call heaven...

If words were spoken.
I would not need that token.
When I look into a darkened velvet sky, they seem to sparkle
like your eyes.
And inside of your strength, no one can hurt what is protected in the arms of
our love.

love that would increase in every season
with step by step sublime in our breath
our body mix like the universal solvent
and the aroma picked up from the barks of vanilla


A sweet bean formed from my very being.
We breath together in our souls in perfect harmony with a beauty that can't be defined.
Words on my neck
Your breath and mine.
We shine.
We are one.

my naughty whisper makes your hairlines straight
and my touch to your bosoms make you realise the womanhood
you see into my eyes with a request over your lips
tell me all that your heart has and get it more passionately

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 13 October 2015

my eyes never sleep inside your dreams The expression of love in the poem is incredible. Not sensuous but aesthetic to the core. Thanks. I quote: inside your arms i get what people call heaven... / Words on my neck / Your breath and mine / We shine / We are one.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2015

Thrilling expression. A beautiful poem on love so nicely envisioned and aptly depicted with metaphor. The favourite lines are.........our love is something that needs no description at night when I talk to the moon, find him jealous your eyes have the beauty of the whole world inside your arms i get what people call heaven... Thank you dear Vishal, may God increase your poetic thoughts......10

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Vishal Sharma 16 October 2015

a love ballad written recently with my friend from usa its sweet and melodious effect sooths mind

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Gauri Vyas 15 October 2015

great thoughts, lines. words..intensely beauteous...10 If words were spoken. I would not need that token. When I look into a darkened velvet sky, they seem to sparkle like your eyes. ! ! ! : :

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Gauri Vyas 15 October 2015

loved everything...creatively fantatstic! If words were spoken. I would not need that token. When I look into a darkened velvet sky, they seem to sparkle like your eyes. ! ! ! : :

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Hazel Durham 14 October 2015

Your words are spellbinding they are your creative beauty of a heart that beats with passion, love and truth and your pen captures your emotions with awesome lines!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 October 2015

Love makes man reasonable mature and likee good people love hs tremandous force to realizeand enjoy the source

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