What Will I Do? ? ! ! : ( Poem by Wassila Nader

What Will I Do? ? ! ! : (

Rating: 4.7


what will I do when you leave me?
I'll be alone,
I'll miss you,
I'll miss your hug when i'm crying,
I'll miss your kiss when I'm smiling,
I'll miss you.
and you wont be there to hold you,
I'LL CRY
and i wont find you beside
to tell me WHY? ? ?
I'll sit apart,
with you in my heart.

BUT! ! !

when I look beside,
I wont see your eyes,
To smile together,
and cry together.

I don't have another one
to talk with,
to sit beside asif i'm sitting beside an angel.
to sit beside,
and cry on her chest.

you are my all
and I have no more
but I want to know
what will I do? ? ?
I love you
and you'll leave me

THEN..............
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO? ? ? ? ! ! ! : (: (: (

(this poem is dedicated to my best and only friend Doha Ewiess) .

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nilufer Dursun 04 January 2010

I see the story of a real friendship in this poem, you have a sensitive heart my dear comrade of poetry...you have been reflected your sincere feelings...8 points fot nice poem. Nilufer DURSUN

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Siddharth Singh 03 January 2010

A true reflection of your dedication and undying love for your friend. And not to mention that you are a natural talent. Good luck.

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Louie -Love & Peace- Levy 02 January 2010

Your poem is sincere and reflects your loving emotion for your friend, Their reply has more value than can ever be judged by strangers. Myself included. TFriends may also want to keep their name private. ...Louie Levy

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Ian Curtis 02 January 2010

You can never replace a true friend, and trust me I know, but they can never leave you. Good luck my young friend Ian

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 01 January 2010

You're a gifted soul Wassila.. This one is really good.

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Beatifully expressed...I can feel the pain...Brilliant.God bless u and ur friend...and ur friendship...

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Kieran J96 14 June 2010

perfectly shows the pain that love can cause, a great poem thnx!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

expression is expressed here

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 January 2010

Captures the pain of love well. Sad one but expressive one.

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Angelica Ayman 08 January 2010

great feelings, , i like the way u express it, , the words, , the rhyme, , the way AMAZING! ! like it soo much thx 4 charring ang.

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