I do not know if you do know,
If that piece of me could
Not flow,
To you to catch yours and
Might draw,
A picture of you in my law.
No body knows,
No body'll never cause
Effects on a mountain
Will never bow right then.
Standing forever his own rose
Fragile dream comes towards.
He bought to fullfill oh
Whatever it could cost, or no!
lovely couple of verses on the first stanza...loved the end the way it connects to the title...questions within statements...i like the poem
i think u successed to tell us what u want to say i like the love between words hold ur pen and keep working
to own a genuine love is priceless what's more do i need when i've already had you by my side...
I do not know if you do know, If that piece of me could Not flow, To you to catch yours and Might draw, A picture of you in my law…. beautiful selction of words...and lines a bit smudged in the mountain haze... nice impact cheers
i don't know what to say something mysterious in the writing way it is full of love it is shining day it is complecated with nice ray...
A price higherthan rubies that's what the soul costs when one is in love with life.A ten from me.
Very well writing I like it! Hope to read more soon! Keep up the good work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There are a few problems in this writing that makes the meaning unclear and therefore the message cannot reach the reader. There are at my count four separate and distinct expressions which are absent the necessary connectors in the English language to make them meaningful or useful. These may indeed, be profound; But since there is no clear meaning, there is no poem. GW62