What's Going On Poem by Harley White

What's Going On

Rating: 5.0


What's going on in stellar skies
perchance eludes our earthly eyes
or mortal minds to e'er discern
regardless how we strain and yearn
or hazard to hypothesize.

Do galaxies ‘midst birthing cries
beget their astral enterprise
plus further realms to forge in turn
what's going on?

Will we acquire awareness wise
enough to grasp what might arise
if Nature be inclined to spurn
our worldly ways, in manner stern—
still could Mankind yet realize
what's going on?

What's Going On
Tuesday, May 23, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: astronomy,knowledge,wisdom,galaxy,vision,perception,human condition,cosmology,earth,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem is in the form of a rondeau… A source of inspiration was the following… Info and image ~ Arp 143… Explanation: A spectacular head-on collision between two galaxies fueled the unusual triangular-shaped star-birthing frenzy, as captured in an image from NASA's Hubble Space Telescope. The interacting galaxy duo is collectively called Arp 143. The pair contains the glittery, distorted, star-forming spiral galaxy NGC 2445 at right, along with its less flashy companion, NGC 2444 at left. Astronomers suggest that the galaxies passed through each other, igniting the uniquely shaped star-formation firestorm in NGC 2445, where thousands of stars are bursting to life on the right-hand side of the image. This galaxy is awash in starbirth because it is rich in gas, the fuel that makes stars. However, it hasn't yet escaped the gravitational clutches of its partner NGC 2444, shown on the left side of the image. The pair is waging a cosmic tug-of-war, which NGC 2444 appears to be winning. The galaxy has pulled gas from NGC 2445, forming the oddball triangle of newly minted stars. Credits: Image ~ NASA, ESA, STScI, Julianne Dalcanton (Center for Computational Astrophysics, Flatiron Inst. / UWashington)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 24 May 2023

Full 5*****

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M. Asim Nehal 24 May 2023

What human eye sees is what it believes, though they are far from our sight but created with a purpose, which is to serve us indirectly, I like the way you put it in poetic form.

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Harley White 25 May 2023

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

An outstanding poem, it is a short poem, but by no means simple, it demands question, two galaxies colliding, and instead of total chaos, we have baby stores being born, toward end? Well, that is what Harley white is asking.

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Harley White 24 May 2023

The rondeau is by definition a short poetic form, which makes it a challenge, but one I like. And yes one wonders how much we do indeed understand about the cosmos, Thank for your thoughtful reading of the poem..

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

I've tried three times to come in on acid in poemhunter fails as usual

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Bill Cantrell 26 May 2023

To comment…..typo vocal recognition…. i've tried three times to comment and as usual….

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

What another outstanding example of poetic, genius, normally, the colliding of galaxies should commit chaos, but what do we have instead question, ? We have more stores being born, yes, N

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