What's The Sense? Poem by Richard Wlodarski

What's The Sense?

Rating: 5.0


What's the point
Of writing
If can't say
What I want?

What's the sense
Of seeing
If all's blind
In hindsight?

What's the sense
Of hearing
When all's deaf
To music?

What's the sense
Of feeling
Life's lost touch
In heaven?

Sunday, April 3, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: point of view
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 April 2022

we all get that I take a day off once in a while

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Nabakishore Dash 05 April 2022

loved your poem very much.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 April 2022

Soren, thank you so much for your constructive criticism. Glad you loved my poem.

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soren Barrett 04 April 2022

Well stated. Concise and to the point covering the senses in such a good way. I loved it.

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Richard Wlodarski 04 April 2022

Kim, thank you for your support and encouragement. It's thanks to poets like you that I do keep on writing. Now more than ever!

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Kim Barney 04 April 2022

Keep on writing. We all have writer's block from time to time, but if you don't keep writing, you will NEVER be able to say what you want.

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