What's the point
Of writing
If can't say
What I want?
What's the sense
Of seeing
If all's blind
In hindsight?
What's the sense
Of hearing
When all's deaf
To music?
What's the sense
Of feeling
Life's lost touch
In heaven?
Soren, thank you so much for your constructive criticism. Glad you loved my poem.
Well stated. Concise and to the point covering the senses in such a good way. I loved it.
Kim, thank you for your support and encouragement. It's thanks to poets like you that I do keep on writing. Now more than ever!
Keep on writing. We all have writer's block from time to time, but if you don't keep writing, you will NEVER be able to say what you want.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
we all get that I take a day off once in a while