Wheel Of Time Turns Poem by Seema Aarella

Wheel Of Time Turns

Rating: 2.5


And...
the wingless bird
pleads
the sky
For once
you descend
.......for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 31 August 2009

Passion, devotion, dedication and helplessness of wingless bird makes one Numb; thanks for sharing, seema!

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Catrina Heart 31 August 2009

awesome picturesque...........profoundness in symbolism! ! !

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 31 August 2009

lovely...you bring the picture to mind....pleading the sky to descend to feel it....sad...a wingless bird

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 September 2011

very nice.full of meaning.liked it.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 November 2009

Short, sweet and deep in content..............

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2009

great metaphorical disclosure! 10+

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 September 2009

a poem filled with hope and despair simultaneously.....very expressive..10

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Indira Babbellapati 03 September 2009

and the sky did descend! the dreamscape of the wingless bird is the sky...

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