When Hope, Comes Tumbling down! Poem by Sandra Feldman

When Hope, Comes Tumbling down!

Rating: 5.0


In less than 2 years,
Lies, the size
Of Volcanos,
Hot lave
Running down
Burning low
And burning high!

That's What
Has been delivered
And much more
Trouble,
By those who think
That with their
Actions,
They can make
This Country
Die.

But they have
Forgotten
How the great
American fighting
Spirit,
Was one day
Born,
Not thru destruction
But thru hard work and
Faith,
In a better tomorrow
For All,
Who worked hard
And the laws
Of our great Country
Respected,
Loved and Obeyed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 10 October 2022

This engrossing verse delivers a powerful message, through elegant poetry, filled with undeniable truth.5 stars.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2022

Never forget the basic foundations of the Great American Spirit: Hard work, and Faith, Respect, Love and Obey the law. Superb poem that excells in true honesty. Dearest Sandra, you have a beautiful honest mind!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2022

But thru hard work and Faith, In a better tomorrow! So very true Respect, love and obey the law, The Great American Fighting Spirit. This beautiful poem excells in brilliance.5 Stars Full Score.

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Politics is ‘opportunism', Sandra. Every player has his own axe to grind…. A most pertinent subject, most poetically expressed

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