When Love Ends Poem by Nosheen Irfan

When Love Ends

Rating: 5.0

Your pain will stay
In the eyes, in your gait
You will embark on never-ending search
You will be a stranger on well-trodden lanes.

The pain will show in face
Hiding itself from stares like acne scars
A sense of defeat will make a home in you and
It will keep the curtains closed and doors locked.

It will be hard, so hard it would slice you
Through the middle, but no blood will ooze
Only wandering thoughts, wandering feet
An eternal sense of stumbling into chairs and tables.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Not personal, just general
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 26 February 2024

Wandering thoughts...wandering feet. Beautiful expressions. Love could often turn out to be toturing enemy Well written piece

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 February 2024

Noshy i just love it Bravo! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 24 February 2024

Wonderful expression..... thanks for sharing....

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Sandra Feldman 08 October 2023

The lost love feeling, so deeply and painfully described, We feel it and with you, silently cry..

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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