When Mars Meets Venus Poem by the poet

When Mars Meets Venus

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His heart beating harder and harder,
Every breath drawn deeper and deeper,
You can see her cheeks redder then ever,
When Mars meets Venus, thus begins this chapter.

Casting their sights, eyes locked together,
But are their thoughts equal, I wonder,
Is he longing for the sparks and thunder,
While she’s wishing for the roses and flower?

In spite of all their differences,
In range of leagues their strength and weaknesses,
Still… hand in hand they are I witness,
How strange God’s will and greatness.

United like two sides of a coin,
Sealed together forever to join,
A pair of doves soaring in joy,
Eternal happiness theirs to enjoy…

“When Mars meets Venus…truly a phenomena to behold.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Wiebe 24 March 2008

this poem is sooo amazing that i even like it. good job and keep the good work.

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Blue Angel 22 March 2008

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! If romance has died, you just resussitated it. BRAVO! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mary Gordley 15 March 2008

Very well done. Thank you.

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