When The Dusk Falls Poem by nimal dunuhinga

When The Dusk Falls

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My life-sized Sun although it's a dummy run
Landfall in the twilight sky like a lozenge
You drowned in the corrugated sea.
Spreading like an orange dye
You're melting and gleaming luminescence.
I keep your corona as a memento
Because another Sun comes tomorrow though it's identical?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 12 July 2006

Wonderful imagery through your eyes.

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Sandra Fowler 12 July 2006

A wise man once said there is nothing new under the sun, but the wonder of the western light continues to amaze and fascinate poets in every age. Very beautiful, Nimal. Sandra

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nimal dunuhinga

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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