When The Moon Is Spooned Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When The Moon Is Spooned

Rating: 5.0


All her worries and all the strains
Fly away like the frightened camphor
Pink ecstasy pinning down the pains.

A romantic dark, a cold lengthy night
It's too cold see blurred is the mirror
Twinkling stars are truly over bright.

The transparent windows' glasses
Revealing cuts and curves of the nature
It's naughty Venus, moon it outclasses.

The moon smiling below being spooned,
Friendly Venus deserves a casual adventure,
Me! I've brought sky down, and it's mooned!

When The Moon Is Spooned
Friday, January 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 30 December 2018

Love can spoon the moon even, beautiful.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 March 2018

A beautifully crafted write that captures the beauty and wonders of nature with compelling imagery.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 January 2018

The moon smiling below being spooned, Friendly Venus deserves a casual adventure...Loved the beauty of expression! An adorable piece of poetry!

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Khalida Bano Ali 13 January 2018

Such a beautiful poem, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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