When There.. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

When There..

Rating: 5.0


When the world is white, when
the world is dark. When time seems
scarce, and nature stark. When there
isn't even, a whisper of a sound.
When you think, not a soul could be
around. In a deep breath, and the beat
of a heart. His hand, his love, is found.

Tuesday, August 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 10 September 2018

Sheer poetic loveliness and wisdom! ! ! Beautiful write- beautiful to read! ! ! ! A trillion 10's would not be enough! ! ! ! !

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Rebecca Navarre 11 September 2018

Thank you! Susan, For such a very beautiful and kind reply! .. Your poetry with such ever gentle beauty, and light that shines so movingly, that touches hearts beautifully! .. Ever so many blessings! .. And much love dear :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2018

The time to find God and his love has been so astutely inscribed by you dear madam. When? When there isn't even, a whisper of a sound, when you think, not a soul could be around in a deep breath, and the beat of a heart. A beautiful poem so nicely and touchingly executed.10

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Rebecca Navarre 01 September 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For such a very beautiful reply! .. Your poetry shows such a beauty that can't be described, but you feel each word, so deeply inside! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 August 2018

Rebecca, such a fine poem👍👍👍

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Rebecca Navarre 29 August 2018

Thank you! .. Bernard, For such a kind reply! .. Your poetry is written with such heart and soul, with words written as beautiful as the sun sets gold! .. Many blessings! ..

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