I don't doubt that their tears are dear and Pretty because they look like pearls more Than they're tears... They cry from their hearts For any reason and Sometimes there is something attributed to Crocodiles' tears, but Their tears, Anyhow break men's hearts and They might break them... How beautiful are women's tears in their Honesty and even in their dishonesty! Tears are a pretty and expressive language And every tear means something in the man's Mind, so Men's heart get broke upon hearing women's Crying.
I think the message is powerful but there's need for work in structure, rhythm, word choice etc. Use some of the poetic devices they will help strengthen your work
I think the message is a powerful and significant one but, there's need for work in structure, word-choice, rhythm etc. Use some of the poetic devices (figurative language) they will help strengthen your work