All Alone Poem by Neil Crosby

All Alone

Rating: 4.4


I am all alone
So cold, and as white as a bone
Betrayed, and broken
From words not spoken
Loveless is me
No one can see
How lonely I am
No one gives a damn
I'll always be a reject, and alone
Heartbreak
Heartache
Alone in a world where no one loves or cares about me
I want to decease to be
All alone, all dead
All of this pain and dread
I am dead
All alone, all alone.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shormily Al Hussain 27 June 2008

very nice, really very nice, so simple words, and ur poem actually means sth, very easy to understand and keep up the good work.

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James Harding 28 July 2008

good poem... i'll give ya an 8

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Tayla Conde 06 October 2008

I like it alot man! I feel this way all the time. I wish I had a love of my own. But then I think of the heartbreak that WILL come shortly afterwards. NICE ONE. >.<

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2008

a write frank and honest...but you won't be that alone in the days to come, Neil...presentaion good 10

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Thomas Coltrin 06 February 2009

fith poem i wrote really good.......

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Demon lover 26 December 2008

Very sad and very good

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This poem is crowded with lonliness. Yet it flows it flows with an isolated rhythm that make it powerful. Good write.

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Aijaz Asif 16 November 2008

very impressive write with good use of rhymes which are my favs. and nice floating stanzas which make readers easy to understand...in short very good write keep it up with the good write sir....thanks 10

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Lucie Smith 10 November 2008

very nice peom...whats kentucky like, i prefer sheffield maself! ! ? ? your poem brings a new meanin to lonliness, well done! !

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Neil Crosby

Neil Crosby

Fort Knox, Kentucky
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