Where Golden Needles Lie... Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Where Golden Needles Lie...

Rating: 5.0


I Remember when, We ran down by the creeks bend.
The summer days we'd spend. We were playmates, we
were friends..Holding onto each others hand, knee
deep in the stream bed we'd stand. Sun sparkling
down over head. Innocent promises, we said. Only
our dreams lie yet ahead.
I remember when, we'd climb trees that bent
and swayed. Then underneath we played, where
golden needles laid...Your It! Tag! ... Those old
memories don't fade, they're still like Yesterday...
And I remember warm nights in september. A
moon so white, with a smile so tender. All darkness
surrendered, as ghostly shadows bowed, and were
rendered, by their silent contender.
And beams were glowing all around, their arms
casting down. Pointing to a path, showing on the
forest floor. Guiding the way to an entrance a door.
To another world, another realm to explore...With
each night different than before. As a hoot owl
calls out ever more...And a startled meadow lark
soars. Day break hits the shore...My heart feels a
prick...But, My mind ignores. As I pick up my
branch and dark off with my sword! Off to play...
underneath, where, the golden needles lay.

Where Golden Needles Lie...
Saturday, November 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2016

This poem is wonderful and sentimental really. Memories do not fade at all. They remain in mind in expressive mood...10

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Rebecca Navarre 14 November 2016

Thank You! Very Much! Kumarmani, For Such A Beautifully, Thoughtful Response! I Look Very Much Forward To Reading Your Wonderfully! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! Inspirational Work! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 06 November 2016

You bring back all innocence to live once more.... it looks greener than evergreen green :)

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Rebecca Navarre 06 November 2016

Hee, Hee Thank You! Soul, Make me giggle and Smile. Love Getting Lost In Your Poetry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kim Barney 05 November 2016

I love nostalgic poems about the past, childhood memories, etc.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 November 2016

Thank You! Kim, You Are Ever So Kind! ! ! Many Ways! ! ! Many Blessings! ! !

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