Where Is The Pity? Poem by Aqua Flower

Where Is The Pity?

Rating: 5.0


Where is the pity
that I should feel?
my life now is just a spinning wheel
why should I have pity?
where were you when things were not pretty
who came to catch me when I took a fall
spiraling down and hitting a brick wall
only my inner strength of self remained
all you knew how to do is blame
in my head I wanted to scream
where are you? ? ? ..abandonment it seemed
where is the pity, you say, that I should feel?
perhaps the pity should be for me
and the wounds that will never heal

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hopelessness,resilience
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Reminiscing on Hurricane Sandy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 02 July 2018

Some who want the most will give the least; and you almost forget to take care of yourself. A 10.

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Rini shibu 30 June 2018

A powerful write, well penned

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Aqua Flower 02 July 2018

Thank you ..it was a powerful storm which brought strong emotions.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

Life is a spinning wheel. But life gathers many experiences. Hopelessness provokes thought but you can feel life well with trust. We hope life will be full of joy. An amazing poem is shared...10

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

A powerful write that screams at the universe.++10

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