Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Which Image Best Impresses - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Reality to face.
And promises made kept to believe,
Seldom seem to meet...
A doing to keep,
Anyone's long lasting satisfaction.
To do with a truth to comprehend.
Or made understood to agree upon.
With a doing that makes it clear,
Which image best impresses...
That has been expressed to leave,
An honesty left.

'And I promise you,
My every intention meant...
Will remain as a meant intention.
To you...
This I promise.
And 'that' I can say,
From the bottom of my empathizing heart.'

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Which Image Best Impresses by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/17/2016 11:40:00 AM)


    Some say promises are meant to be fulfill and some say promises are meant to be broken...nice sharing...thank u for sharing :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 17, 2016



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