Not important sweetheart what your brain concedes,
Important is the truth of your heart it feeds.
Not important sweetheart, how much knowledge you have,
Important is application when you sow its seeds.
Not important sweetheart, how nice is your belief,
Important is its reflection in your day to day deeds.
Not important sweetheart your outer charms,
Important is attraction from inside that pleads.
Not important sweetheart the smiles and joys,
Important is attention to the eye that bleeds.
Not important sweetheart forget your sins,
Important is regression after human misdeeds,
Not important sweetheart, how much I love you,
Important is my passion in the time of needs.
A well articulated poem written with insight to capture the essence of love while discarding the vain glorification of beauty. A powerful full piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up.
Outstanding write about all that really matters is a good heart and soul to be kind, caring and to be able to forgive, with inspired lines this poem is a perfect gem!
Not important sweetheart, how much I love you, Important is my passion in the time of needs.- - - - - - - Oh! Unforgettable lines.
A delightful poem of what's important in life. Love overshadows all. Loved the poem. Thank you kind sir.
A successful experiment, a great poem with all the charms of a Ghazal.
This is also very outstanding so beautifully penned with very loving words.....a right Ghazal indeed....1o/10
Great write emphasizing the inner qualities of your beloved and the core and quintessence of true love which transcends the boundaries of physical beauty and something that springs from inside!
Important is my passion in the time of needs...........all the necessities of good relationships wonderfully presented in this poem.....nice work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful Gajal, carrying sweet, nifty message!