White Swans (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt

White Swans (Haiku)

Rating: 4.2


From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"

a sunny spring day
pair of white swans are paddling
in a bluish pond

Wednesday, May 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: swan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 02 May 2018

This haiku is a fine painting!

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Bipasha D 02 May 2018

Thanks you Kostas..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2022

A wonderful haiku. Extremely well penned.5 stars.

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Savita Tyagi 13 September 2020

Lovely haiku, so expressive of a serene and loving sight of the animal world. Congratulations on your first book, and all the best wishes for more to come.

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Bri Edwards 08 December 2018

from my online research re Haiku, i'd say haiku is always supposed to be on a Nature topic. but people started writing 'haiku' about people (who i consider part of Nature) and now there is Senryu, sometimes called Human Haiku. i like swans, though i've never had one as a friend, and i like the poem. bri (:

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Bipasha D 11 December 2018

Thank you. I like to stick to the traditional form of haiku.

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Akhtar Jawad 22 June 2018

A beautiful scene so nicely painted by the poetess.

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Bipasha D 11 December 2018

Thank you Akhtar ji for your comment.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 May 2018

I find a great pleasure when I transport my poetic soul to the spot where your poetic eyes have been fixed! A fabulous Haiku Bipasa! Loved reading it...10

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Bipasha D 11 December 2018

Thank you Dr. Dillip for such a lovely comment and also for the rating.

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