Who Is She? Poem by Steven Pimentel

Who Is She?

Rating: 5.0


im walking home
& i see this girl across the street..

cute face, sexy body
dem who is she?

beautiful hair to the front
can't really see her face that much
but with that brown skin i knew she had a pretty one..

i cross the street
& now she was in front of me..

i fell off my game when i seen the way she worked her hips
almost sliped when she licked her lips

so i walked faster
& got next to her
dem she was cute
she looked like my future
i open my mouth
& said...

' hey girl i am so in to ya '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharisse Barkley 22 July 2009

I like this one, made me laff alil cuz it was cute, keep up the qood work.

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Melanie Guerrero 11 July 2009

No Copyright in ur poems! && Thats wat makes 'em so qood cominq up w|ur own ideas

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Lola Hi 11 July 2009

it's an original and special poem i like it so much i had fun on reading it.

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Fiona Davidson 11 July 2009

Excellent modern piece Steven...10+++

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