Steven Pimentel

Rookie (9-17-91 / New York)

Your Mistake - Poem by Steven Pimentel

You was the Mistake I got Into
The Trap I fell Into
but if it wasn't True Love
I wouldn't gotten Into YOU.

I heard all the Warnings
Some of my Friends told Me

but when your that in Love
is like your Heart Opens
& your Ears start Closing.

I Wish you would of hold Me
cause even when I held You
some how you still Slipped AWAY.

but that was Your Mistake.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

My Poetry comes from My History with Women.

Comments about Your Mistake by Steven Pimentel

  • Brian Jani (6/15/2014 4:42:00 PM)


    Yah this is good poetry (Report) Reply

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  • Justin Reamer (8/3/2012 1:07:00 PM)


    It is a rather sad poem. I can feel your pain. I hope you are doing okay, but this is a phenomenal poem. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Marissa Ford (7/17/2012 10:58:00 PM)


    tear jerker, so much emotion i love it! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2012 1:04:00 PM)


    mistakes are the footprints of lovers. we're gonna learn that. nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Cariad (6/1/2012 11:52:00 AM)


    There's allot of relation here. I def had this happen a time or two. (Report) Reply

  • (5/20/2012 9:17:00 PM)


    The true words from from a loving heart.Like it. (Report) Reply

  • Marissa Ford (5/17/2012 4:47:00 PM)


    I love it! ! ! deffienitly explains some of us (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2012 1:30:00 PM)


    this poem is awesome (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Kuetsinya (5/15/2012 3:40:00 PM)


    Good one there. Take note of the advice of your friend below and it will do you more good than harm, thank you (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2012 3:32:00 PM)


    We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person.
    W. Somerset Maugham

    Nice Work
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2012 3:31:00 PM)


    We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person.
    W. Somerset Maugham

    Nice work
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  • (5/15/2012 3:17:00 PM)


    You write from your hear, . Beatifull. (Report) Reply

  • Goodenough Sakhile(shotaromeo) Dlamini (5/15/2012 3:16:00 PM)


    YEAQH REAL IT IS THE HISTORY..I HEARD THE ARTMOSPHERE OF IT...IT A GOOD ONE FOR A REMEMBRANCE OF HER (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Fontaine Grieco (5/15/2012 2:46:00 PM)


    Young man, you definitely write with your heart. Now here is the next execise you need to do for yourself.
    Go to the library and starting reading the classic poets, and see if you can develop a similar style. If you dislike
    their poetry, go with more recent poets. But I will tell you very honestly, you must attend an English class, more than one, and agree to follow my instructions. If not, your poetry will never go further. It's like wishing to be a racecar driver, if you know you have it, then you must practice correct? Then practice your writing and spelling, and keep writing from your heart. That's what poets do best! ! Real poet's that is! ! Thank-you for listening my new friend.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 15, 2012



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