Who Is This Girl I Have Met Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Who Is This Girl I Have Met

Rating: 4.0


The girl I can't talk to,
The girl I can't reach to.
The girl my heart beats for,
The girl my soul hopes for.
Who is this girl I have met,
The girl I love for,
The girl I live for.
The girl I wait for,
The girl I wish for.
Who is this girl I have met?
Her name is five letters of the alphabet,
To know them is ''LOVE''..

Friday, May 23, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DELETED NOW 22 August 2008

it's fine what ur doing for her...I know she's not me but u have to let her do something or then it sounds like she nothing or perhaps a robot

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mmm... lovely poem. i think this is my fav. xoxox

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when i read this poem. i feel like your really in love. and you would do anything for that girl. beautiful. x3 mill

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 June 2008

I liked the repetition, but I thought the lines chosen were not the most enticing for the reader.So I gave it a seven. I could be wrong on this one. It's just how I feel. GW62

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Coreena Dejesus 17 June 2008

beautiful. lovely piece.

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