*slayer*#* Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

*slayer*#*

Rating: 2.9


We transzited here apart & alone
Until our adventures in luck & laughtor
Now we'r together in heart & stone
A new exciteing plain to explor
my vauel to you this day
To be true blue, to you
In love, life, and play
My lucky charm defender, pink leprecon slayer
Supercalifragilisticexpialdocious, **PAY**

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 25 July 2008

The song at the end of this poem reminded me about my childhood days when we used to sing this song in great ardour. Your poem is cute. Thanks. arya

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I LOVE IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ....Your the best side kick i've EVER had! ! ...This was soooo sweet! ! ! thank you sooooooo much! ! ! ! <3Payyton! ! ! !

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beautiful, she loves it... :) mill.

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Tyease Collins 07 August 2008

This is nice...she really likes it lol I do too =]

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Brittany graviet 10 September 2008

its really good, but the last line looses me, i don't get it, but maybe i'm not supposed to?

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Catrina Heart 19 January 2009

humor poetry..nice one though needs few editings my friend...Loved your poem.

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totally disturbed 22 November 2008

I like this very cool..

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Ryan Thompson 03 November 2008

this is cool :) -ryan

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Bobbie Mcnay 30 October 2008

that poemis good i really like it

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Aijaz Asif 21 September 2008

in a single long word you are everything and im nothing im blind everything's fake i can only see you cause you are real.....nice write, thhanks

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