Who The Fool Is Watching The Moon At Skies Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Who The Fool Is Watching The Moon At Skies

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Full moon was shining on the sky,
your hand in my hand, so close were we,
I was in you, you were in me,
and I was then in a mood to fly.

Naughty clouds partly covered the moon,
a shy moonlight shivering with cold,
stars were peeping, a show too bold,
friendly winds of a late monsoon,

did a lovely job for the thirsty eyes,
they uncovered two lovely moons,
a kind downpour of wet monsoons,
brought a clear view of pinkish dyes.

Two lovely dyes almost exposed,
two brown moons, convex skies,
life on the earth in concave dies,
for the high skies my eyes were closed!

The brownish lover then turned so pink,
how to control the stinging palms?
How to defuse the current in arms?
How to stop the lips from a drink?

'The weather is nice for the real romance,
and the rains are cold and so warming',
She said, 'The moon is too charming, '
My eyes are busy with a feminine dance!

Who the fool is watching the moon at skies,
Who the devil wants to watch the lunar eclipse,
For me are the lips, for me the ellipse,
swimming in a sea of a woman's dyes!

Sunday, September 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 September 2015

A smile on my face after reading your poem, Lol....Nice poem. I enjoyed it 10++++

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Kelly Kurt 27 September 2015

I am not the romantic like you my friend. If the clouds are merciful, I will watch tonight's total eclipse. I suppose if a beautiful woman was with me under the sky, I would show her some attention too.: -)

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Jaishree Nair 27 September 2015

The romantic pair enjoying the late monsoon wind under the moonlight. Well envisioned .enjoyed reading .thanks for shatino

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Khalida Bano Ali 27 September 2015

What nice imagery, what a lovely poem......................................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Full moon shines in sky and hand to hand we keep on and watch. While cloud covers sky we do not able to see moon but it too does not become deep night. Weather plays nice and real romance in such wonderful imagery as described her. Very wisely drafted and shared....10

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