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Why Wait

Rating: 5.0

KISS ME
TAKE YOUR FINGERS
BURNING WITH LONGING
TRACE THE OUTLINE
OF MY FACE
WARM MY FRAGILE SKIN
PLACE YOUR HOT CHEEK
NEXT TO MINE
BRUSH PAST MY LIPS
TAKE MY BREATH AWAY

GENTLY PULL ME
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 January 2009

Hey baby I cant wait any longer to be in the plot as well.Yes I want to be the character in your writes.What a hot poem! !

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Blue Eyes 07 January 2009

this is the top of romantic language.i am truly touched.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 August 2009

A highly persuasive poem indeed! ammmmmmazing poetic picto..... 10+

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Alf Hutchison 23 May 2009

Like arrows from cupids bow... directed at the inner soul... beautifully written... Alf

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Barry A. Lanier 19 February 2009

OF COURSE YOUR WORK ALWAYS REMINDS ME OF MINE, , , MY PASSION AGAIN YEARS AGO WHEN i WAS PAINTING..'vIRTUOSO'......: :)))))))))))))

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 January 2009

honest and expressive! ! ! keep writing! ! !

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Rakesh Rampariya 13 January 2009

nice wel done.it's very loving...........loving

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