From far a mountain cleft
A broken voice came through the jungle wind
Probably a baby's cry
I was sleeping already
The snowy breeze was scorching my fragile bones
Then the broken cry hit my half-wake dream
And a weird sorrow silently grew up within
As the cry immersing deeper, deep inside
Then I never understood
Why I was crying in the deep corner of the mountain
Was it because of the love denied?
Was it because your promises broken?
A well written poem.... Truly heartfelt and touching....5 stars *****
For love and pure love if the heart fall in the pit of broken promises then the mountain of love cries also!
Absolutely brilliant. A poem of love has another dimension. Loved reading it. Thanks a lot.
Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A broken heart always makes a good poem...Love it!