Why Was I Crying? Poem by Dhiren Doley

Why Was I Crying?

Rating: 5.0

From far a mountain cleft
A broken voice came through the jungle wind
Probably a baby's cry
I was sleeping already
The snowy breeze was scorching my fragile bones
Then the broken cry hit my half-wake dream
And a weird sorrow silently grew up within
As the cry immersing deeper, deep inside

Then I never understood
Why I was crying in the deep corner of the mountain
Was it because of the love denied?
Was it because your promises broken?

Wednesday, November 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
Kostas Lagos 26 November 2020

A broken heart always makes a good poem...Love it!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 November 2020

A well written poem.... Truly heartfelt and touching....5 stars *****

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 November 2020

For love and pure love if the heart fall in the pit of broken promises then the mountain of love cries also!

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Rajnish Manga 25 November 2020

Absolutely brilliant. A poem of love has another dimension. Loved reading it. Thanks a lot.

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Chinedu Dike 25 November 2020

Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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