Dislocated Heart

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Why You Tryin To Lose Weight? ! ? ! - Poem by Dislocated Heart

My blood and veins filled with rage,
as I say... 'WHY ARE YOU TRYIN TO LOSE WEIGHT? ! ? ! '

Gosh, she on the treadmill all day...
without it, she is gorgeous anyway..
Why does she tell me she fat...
when I know she all that!

She got the curves like the waves,
She can ride me all day..
yet by the end of the night,
she at the gym, tryin to lose 2 pounds,
when I rather her keep it.
cuz she looks Great!

Gosh, them girls with only skin and bones..
what you tryin to do?
its not sexy you know..

I'm no chubby chaser,
but hey.. I like my girl with some meat,
but all it matters once again..
its the personality.


(To my friends and the girl I like... I dont know why ppl try to be skin and bone... its just awkward looking.. maybe this will make other ppl realize being skinny isnt the new 'In')


Comments about Why You Tryin To Lose Weight? ! ? ! by Dislocated Heart

  • (3/31/2010 8:05:00 AM)


    You tell em' man... i love this.. I hate it when skinny people say there fat when there really not.. they just want the compliments...

    IM SKINNY AND PROUD OF IT...I DONT CARE BOUT WEIGHT! ! ! LOL still love this piece :)
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 25, 2009



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