Dislocated Heart

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*love* - Poem by Dislocated Heart

I am in love.. that I can say..
with her.. I wont deny.

She is on my mind.. constantly..
I miss her.. more then words can say..
I love her more than all the stars in the sky..

I write to her.. I miss her more..

Valentines day..
I wont even be there to see the look on her face.
When she opens that box..
smiles.. and maybe that twinkle in her eyes..

I'd do anything.. to make her smile..

Sorry I'm not there to give flowers..
If I could.. I'd give you a rose each and everyday..
I'd take you to the beach.. and spend the night away..

My love.. understand this.. understand now..
I love you.. never will that change.

distance is the only thing thats keeping us apart.

I wish you well, sleep and dream of paradise..
wake up, and smile to warm treats and delight..
One day.. I'll be right there by yourside..

No matter what..
This love will stay..
until my very last breath,
until, my very last sight..
until.. the end of time..


Comments about *love* by Dislocated Heart

  • (4/21/2009 6:07:00 AM)

    this is a heartfelt poem great work (Report)Reply

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  • (2/10/2009 11:48:00 AM)

    this is a touching peom <3
    ~Kerli
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  • (1/26/2009 6:56:00 PM)

    wow this poem touched my heart. i love this poem very much. it makes me think of how my boyfriend used to feel about me and although this poem was not written with me in mind, i pretended that the words were being said to me by my x. i love this poem very much. keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/21/2009 12:36:00 PM)

    I wanted to write you a comment but unfortunately i truly can't......this poem has left me speechless... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/20/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    I really like this poem... It is very sincere and heartfelt. Keep on writing you are great at it. Do you think that you could read my poems and tell me what you think of them? ? Thank you
    Amanda
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  • (1/19/2009 11:26:00 AM)

    I really like this poem.. it makes me speechless.. i have no reall ygood comment to decribe this., .. its that good...keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • (1/18/2009 12:28:00 AM)

    This is beautiful love.. very real and true. Pure and moves very well.. Thank you for sharing

    KRISTA
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  • (1/17/2009 11:56:00 PM)

    You just made my day with this fine loving and soulful poem of yours....so heartfelt, penned with eloquence and fine flow of words...10+++ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009



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