Wilderness Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Wilderness

Rating: 5.0


Standing naked and tall against all odds,
encountering the waves of uncertainty
the courage of the man shouts aloud,
O' leader of the life now leads me through
this darkness of the night and the thick clouds.

The birds seem wingless and directionless,
The wind is chill and hard on the nose,
But I don't scorn to scream anymore.
Let me breathe under the bright blue sky,
Dance barefoot in the sea water
Swim in the love of the ocean and write poems
And dream of a heavenly garden
blooming with moony flowers and starry shine
And wake up screaming Your name.

Friday, November 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical ,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 20 November 2020

Swim in the ocean and write poem And wakeup screaming Nicely woven wilderness.

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S H 20 November 2020

Excellent O' leader of the life now leads me through this darkness of the night and the thick clouds.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 November 2020

this darkness of the night and the thick clouds. and You have left all of us far behind the WILDERNESS OF ALL TIMES LOVELY RHYMES

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Valsa George 21 November 2020

'Swim in the love of the ocean and write poems And dream of a heavenly garden blooming with moony flowers and starry shine' Despite all hardships of life, life is beautiful for a person who is positive and brave enough to face life......! Beautiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2020

The birds seem wingless and directionless, The wind is chill and hard on the nose, ...Birds love to fly with much freedom. Moony flowers bloom with greater beauty. Dual perception is reflected very well. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned...5 stars

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Suresh Kumar Ek 20 November 2020

In the dream of a heavenly garden Waves of uncertainity vanishes. Nicely penned poem

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Kostas Lagos 20 November 2020

Magical! Enchanting poem

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