Wilford's Dream Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Wilford's Dream



Young Wilford had a special dream
when he was just eleven;
he had a view of many souls
as they were nearing heaven.

A great gulf stood where all must pass
and drop their worldly gains.
This was no easy task for most;
their faces showed their pains.

Among those many souls appeared
a very aged man
whose face showed agony and grief
while gazing o'er the span.

At last his heavy sack he dropped,
then forward on he trod,
his shoulders slumped, his eyes downcast
as he approached his God.

A few years later, Wilford moved
into another town
with father and his stepmother
(who never wore a frown) .

There on the street, young Wilford saw
that old man from his dream!
He recognized the man at once;
how strange it all did seem!

When that same man was dead and gone
and silent as a mouse,
they found a fortune buried there
right in the old man's house!

Wilford's Dream
Friday, April 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(Finished writing 26 April 2019)

This is a true story, with very slight modifications. After they buried the old man, his son-in-law found a hundred thousand dollars in a cellar belonging to the deceased. The cellar may not have been (and probably wasn't)right in the house. This was somewhere around the year 1821.

Also, I don't know if the stepmother never (or ever)wore a frown.I was just trying to find a good rhyme, and that was the best I could do! (I originally had ALWAYS instead of NEVER.)

It was a few years after Wilford and his family moved to the new town before the old man died, but Wilford had recognized him the first time he saw him on the street, and knew immediately that he was the same man that he had seen in a dream a few years before that.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Diane Jessen 28 September 2019

What an interesting poem - and story! You've done well in capturing it!

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Kim Barney 01 October 2019

Thank you, thank you very much!

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Spock The Vegan 27 April 2019

Very interesting story turned into a wonderful poem. Thanks.

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Kim Barney 01 October 2019

Thank you very much, Spock!

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