Will O' The Wisp Poem by Utsav Patel
Will O' The Wisp
On a grimmest evening...
Salty breeze was blowing...
Cacophony of birdcall was provoking...
That aroma;
Which was coming from your hair...
As if you are everywhere that exists...
The oceans between us...
Anguished claspings of hands...
But silences that remained...
Downcastly gazing at your foot...
Underneath my legs sand was creeping gently...
Everything that carries me to you...
Symphony of that tides took us with them...
Deep;
Descends...
To that skysill;
To that wee ships...
To those beautiful isles...
But i couldn't move...
And you are going to the horizon...
Suddenly, you're vanished in the gleam...
And a cigarette burned my fingers...! ! !
an animated poem with deep feelings in it............v nice write...........njoied reading thoroughly especially the last punch line!
Utsav Patel, first of all I want to thank you for visiting my page and for nice comment.secondly, you have great potential in writing just keep it up, and of course if you need any thing i'll be glade to help.
Very vividly delineated images, beautifully contrived intimacy, and a dollop of pain and anguish. A very mature poem.
Beautiful poem.I must say you have a beautiful imagery of thoughts.The way you describe the nature surrounding your love is excellent. The feeling in your hearts in such a beautiful atmosphere is evolving in this poem.i liked this poem very much.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 1:22:44 PM # 1.0.0
likedf the poem but smoking is injuries to health..ha ha