Will Power Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

Will Power

Rating: 5.0


Galloped for the last lap,
quiveringly, with icy soul.
Knowing your fiendish gambit,
I saw your skew-look and snook,
Fighting with my own sciamachy now.
You can't put manacle on the pinnacle
of my own will power.
Though I'm the most defeatist among the defeated.
Jot over the golden pot
Soon I'll come as victor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

Holy moly! Holy dooly! are you a player or are you writer? I mean player of words - Like John Keats you possess the heart and art and craft and draft of the Language. I love these poetic pick lines of yours with think emotion give me kick and I tick your poems with clicks on the net note books. ha! ha! ha! :) :) :) :) Bye bye friend see you soon, You won my heart - you are poems are RED-HOT! 'Fighting with my own sciamachy now. You can't put manacle on the pinnacle'

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Christina Phan 25 September 2011

this is short and says alot. I love the title and poems. its just that good.

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Stefanie Fontker 24 September 2011

A beautiful beginning and a triumphant finish. Beautiful writing, this is one of your best so far.

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2011

Soon I'll come as victor ....One of my fav line here...you find your WILL POWER and because of that you Will be a victor for victory..i like the spirit here, feels like 'I am gonna take myself higher and let's do it without nothing be my barrier! ' hahahaha :) Unwritten Soul

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Crimson Love 23 September 2011

'Jot over the golden pot Soon I'll come as victor. ' I love this line, very well written :)

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