When The Moonlight Loved A Lotus Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

When The Moonlight Loved A Lotus

Rating: 4.6


Fragrance of love awakened me,
In my lonley night way
When a crystal face poured light
On my elated petals of love
Those precious words,
That I caressed in my slumbered lips,
Illuminated like a beam of ecstacy
For an iridiscent sylph,
Just to say 'I LOVE YOU'

Monday, September 5, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

Gracious me! Oh my god! People used to call me king of expressions and words - now I shed my title for your my dear amigo - a noble poet - Because it is you who own it not I nor any one! Your vocabulary rocks sending me mazy making me your crazy fan! with huge aplomb to your talent and prudence which is dense in your wisdom of words my lords - vipins - great! 10++++++++

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Jinal Oswal 13 October 2011

I see, a beautifully portrayed poem. Loved it :)

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Spiritual Seeker 28 September 2011

In a few lines you potray love beautifully. Well done...love reading this poem again and again.10

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Dave Walker 06 September 2011

Very good. Love is all things and your Poem shows that very well. I invite you To read my new one called, astral light.

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Hans Vr 06 September 2011

This a fantastic poem with great images and lots of feeling. Well written!

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