Will You? ? ? ? Poem by Melvina Germain

Will You? ? ? ?

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Will you love me when I’m old and gray
and can barely hear a word you say.

Will you love me when my face begins to fall
and I’m no longer standing straight and tall.

Will you love me when my words are no longer clear,
and I slur almost every word you hear.

Will you love me when I ask you your name,
but depend on you just the same.

Will You? ? ? ?


(April 14,2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 15 April 2007

What a beauty, this one! ! ! ! OMG... this one is like the query-poem for a poem of mine which would look like a response (I had written that last year but) ..... I wish you would go on to read my poem on #954-titled as: the-thoughtful-print-a-gift Melvina - you are truely a poetess! ! You inspire, please keep writing forever!

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Lady Lyn Rosete - Buchan 15 April 2007

A very good poem, it makes me reflect on what true love really is...it does not fade through time.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 April 2007

Every young person should read this poem and remember they will also become old one day and find answera to these questions.

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Billy Thompson 16 August 2011

'Will You'. How powerful yet laden with vunerability at every line. Frighteningly true to everyday life and poetically put in the light that it deserves as this happens to all of us if we live long enough more often than not. Let's hope the answer comes back a resounding yes! Beautifully written with flair.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 April 2007

Don`t you know Melvina by now, when you truely love a soul, they are for every beautiful and never grow old... andy x

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Ashish R 17 April 2007

The one who answers 'yes' to these questions is a true lover indeed.Awesome write. Ashish.

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... Sheila 16 April 2007

I hope the answers to these questions are yes. Don't we all want to know that he will still care for us, if things become this dire? Another great poem, Me! vina! Very touching and sweet!

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JoAnn McGrath 15 April 2007

Melvina....outstanding.......how you capture so loving our fears of turning old..... Applause, applause.......... : O)

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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