Friday, September 25, 2009

Winds Of Revolution

Rating: 4.6
Impassioned perturbed, I look at life.
At concrete jungles and their strife.

Rainbow’s promise shredded to naught.
Pouring shards on the weary path.

Bitterness stirs the vacant heart.
Blurry gaze at the apple cart.

Smoke and smog suffuses through.
Spreading scourges of pain and flu.

The sun it hides in Stifling skies.
Truth, too, engulfed in deceitful lies.

Earth-tones once, that stood back blues.
Now like devils dance, to autumn hues.

Whence they riot, for whom they float;
on embers Innocence, as they gloat!

Sit on tombs and suppress their glee.
Interred the bones and set them free.

When roosting rooks are back at home.
To tell off giants, as pygmies, gnomes.

When shalt not stand, mounts and hills.
Only carmine ponds shall eke out thrills.
saadat tahir
Nazia Usmani 11 July 2010
what can i say about this one.........your own style at its best to express the dismay and loss of beauty of world..... the echoes of past....... so touching and haunting at the same time........revolutionary.....
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Sahar Sahar 16 February 2010
rays of hope come out of the clouds of dismay......and subverting deficiencies in life is finale.......wonderful poem
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Ritty Patnaik 16 November 2009
dear saadat.....excellent poem, full of meaning and wisdom.this is going down to my favourites. ritty
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Shakuntala Sharma 30 September 2009
your poem sounds musical-I loved reading it aloud. I liked your bio-page too. thanks for your comment on my poem ' horizons... '
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Alison Cassidy 27 September 2009
It is the constant barrage of injustices that fire the revolutionary spirit. This poem explains with passion and clarity the helplessness and hopelessness of those who finally stand up and say 'Enough! '. The rhyming couplets give a rhythmical force to your poem - like the marching of angry feet. Great work. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Indira Babbellapati 26 September 2009
greatness of a poet lies in saying what everyone z aware of in his/her inimitable style!
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Raj Arumugam 26 September 2009
the craftsmanship and rhythm are excellent, saadat
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Rehana Nazli 26 September 2009
Bitterness stirs the vacant heart. Blurry gaze at the apple cart. Smoke and smog suffuses through. Spreading scourges of pain and flu. Profound, meaning making lines....the mood of the poem is blue.10/10
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excellent poem..meaningful and rich with thoughts....beautifully crafted
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~ Jon London ~ 25 September 2009
Great work....nicely penned flowing have created a wonderful poem here my in all that surrounds us.....keep'm coming....10
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