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! ! Winter Fun

Rating: 2.5

Delicious snowflake
floating perfect then melting
on my outstretched tongue

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Ernestine Northover 26 February 2008

Bet that was a bit of a shock for the poor snowflake Michael, the heat must have been scorching! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Was it curry you had for lunch! ! ! ! ! Sweet write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Original Unknown Girl 26 February 2008

Just the mere mention of snowflakes sounds delicious. Cute haiku! HG: -) xx

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Michael Shepherd 26 February 2008

Not if it's yellow. heh heh.

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So, you eat snow. Knew there was something odd about you. :) Perfect, delicious Haiku M. t x

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