After many days of our freedom,
Growing our knowledge but failed wisdom.
We are developed our society and mind
In the point of view of humanity, we are blind.
Somebody do every thing for aspect
Ala’s but there is no prospect.
Everybody proved that they are star
In the sense of morality so many far.
Life is a river, it has two sides
In the modern age, negative side is more wide.
The world is willing to play the game of earning money
But in the eyes of god, this game is really funny.
In this world there is no place for emotion
Because emotion killed by profession.
“oh father forgive them, they don’t know what they do”
But every thing is same, something has to do.
We get physically freedom but lost psychological freedom
As a result, we are lost our wisdom
i completly agree. what has this world come to? THAT WAS REALLY AMAZING.(Thanks for writing it)
A poet has social responsibility...I feel that. I'm happy your poems depict the same emotions as that of mine....very good poe.
Good poem but you must know that you can have wisdom and you do have wisdom, if you can use your mind and if you learned anything in life you have wisdom.
'In the point of view of humanity, we are blind' ~ Dear Poet Subham we’re intentionally contracting [blindness] not expanding [vision] 'Because emotion killed by profession' ~ actually we’re even not professional but pseudo professional…professionals gives all of his…here we’re trying to achieve by fluke…want to achieve effortlessly …not possible…very wise poetry indeed needs contemplation…. thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Indeed, sometimes in life we lost track of what is important and get caught of on materialism and other trivial stuff. We are not human beings having a spiritual experience - but spiritual beings having a human experience as I have heard a wise person say. Best of luck in your poetry and in your life. *Cheers, Subham Dutta*
A portrayal of dual acts of modern day world which presents as civilized but apparently seems very insolent due to the greed that lies inside the bloodstream of the expanding populations.
I absolutly love that you have distinguishe thath there is a difference between knowledge and wisdom. It is my belief that wisdom comes from lifes many experiences. One must live a day and let it go, but kept are those moments that make us wise.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiiful poem.... absolutely beautiful 20/10 *tyease*