Wishes Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Wishes

Rating: 5.0


</>Wishing voices
Coming
From the brain with
Long words

Wishing voices
Coming
From the heart
Only Hi

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 08 April 2009

How original. There is a warmth written into your last stanza that is very appealing. This poem deserves many tens. Excellent! Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

The wishes of heart are the true wishes so it comes with short word................good write..10+++..........

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Rachel Butler 07 September 2009

From the heart Only Hi Rachel Ann Butler

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Vinod Kumar 04 January 2012

thank you for all respected members

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Elena Sandu 23 August 2011

Yes! Mind is said to always make things look complicate but heart beats a simple drum, doesn't need much to be heard, the simple 'Hi' comming straight from it, brings up best smiles. Lol, your poem is catching strong on me, I see now the heart's every beat as: '-ha: Ai.ha Ai. ha Ai...'(in japanese could be interpreted as (ha, - a breathe, Ai means love)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 January 2010

‘Brain Voices are Teethis… Heart Voices are Sweetish’… niv 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Catrina Heart 31 October 2009

the brain and the heart for its fine wishes...lovely!

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Mark Nwagwu 29 October 2009

yes, we need the brain; we ned the heart; use the brain for what it is made to be and let the heart grow, expand, to contain all of the universe, in love. Even if we knew nothing, still we can love. This is a great write, Vinod, my 10 for this mark nwagwu

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