Wishes Poem by akram awadat

Wishes

Rating: 4.5


If I can have sweet wishes
I wish to see you everyday
to look at your expressions and hear your voice
to see a wide smile at your face.

to put my hand in your hand
to sit on the shore and watch the sunrise
to feel your heartbeat and whisper I love you
as i say 'i am yours and you are mine'..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

wow, she's so lucky! Wonderful, a heart rending piece! Thanks! best regards, jdh

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Luwi Habte 14 October 2009

ops! this is so nice romantic poem well done poet luwi

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 October 2009

a very sweet romantic poem....10

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Rachel Butler 13 October 2009

I wish to see you everyday Rachel Ann Butler

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Obinna Eruchie 13 October 2009

Your wish to have your love, the one who is far away from you, be nigh you by your side. Touching.

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the Qween 25 May 2010

IT'S AN LOVELY POEM DEEP AND TOUCHING, BUT THERE IS SADENESS IN YOUR POEM LIKE YOU WONT TO DO SOMETHING BUT YOU CAN'T. BUT OTHER WAY IT'S LOVELY

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Sallie Howson 11 February 2010

simply beautiful :) .........

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Sandra Dodd 29 January 2010

Ah and a happy lady she must be! So sweetly done. Congratulations.

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Sasidharan Vellat Menon 23 December 2009

Love is the essence of life. Here u expressed well

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Akram Saqib 22 October 2009

ALAS! WISHES DO NO COME TRUE

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