With You In That Autumn Poem by Muzahidul Reza

With You In That Autumn

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With You In That Autumn
23 January, 2019

Leaves falling did call us urgently there
We have seen damning energy where,
One said, "One month is remaining
Of mist and cold season approaching;

But before that all the leaves will fall"
We were standing under the tree was tall
At noon it could not shade fully
We looked at open field usually;

There autumn was harvesting time
The lands were just ripped garden,
By a long aisle for long we walked
Golden crops touched our bear feet;

The sun was temperate and mild
Fully alert was that autumnal grey field,
Long narrow path leisurely we walked
Nature was pale but beautifully slimed;

We looked at some bloomed wild flowers
They were spreading a messy odor
Therefore, we were not interested to pluck
We just did touch those all and check;

We turned and turned all around
Those us that autumn tightly caught,
Though where once we mistook the path
But smiled on us finally the truth.

Wednesday, January 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 24 January 2019

wo feel the autumnal feeling all through the poem, excellent poetic expression

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M Asim Nehal 23 January 2019

A nice rhythmic poem on season Autumn, nicely written.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 January 2019

Falling leaves call us urgently. Golden crops touch the period of golden harvesting. Nature beautifully smiles. Autumn's smile finally brings truth. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10

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Muzahidul Reza

Muzahidul Reza

Charaihatee; Mohangonj; Rajibpur.
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