Valsa George

Wither Vanished My Dream? - Poem by Valsa George

In the wee hours of a silent night
In my sleep I dreamt a dream
A lovely delightful dream
That took me to the land of love

In my dream, I saw my prince
His contours aflame with sparks of fire
His eyes dewy with liquid love
His lips quivering for a passionate kiss

But the cruel dawn came down
Sounding bugles across the silent sky
Spreading thick veils of separation
And tore his face from mine

Come, Oh Night! Come once again
Driven in the chariot of darkness
And bring him to the shelter of my arms
To wrap him in the warmth of my caresses
To enfold him in the tangles of my tresses
When the whole world, in deep slumber lies

Let me once more be blessed
With the dream of my heart’s delight
And be lost in that magic spell
Of his electric, enchanting presence
Which in the height of my passion
Was sullied by the light of dawn!

Comments about Wither Vanished My Dream? by Valsa George

  • Bri Edwards (9/22/2016 8:56:00 PM)

    favorite lines so far:
    To wrap him in the warmth of my caresses
    To enfold him in the tangles of my tresses.............very nice!


    ......electric, enchanting presence
    Which in the height of my passion
    Was sullied by the light of dawn! may have a chance to succeed in poetry, young lady! !

    a gorgeous poem. too bad it is somewhat of a love poem. needs more humor/humour! did i say MORE? ?

    bri :)

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/13/2016 4:09:00 AM)

    Come once again. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2016 7:49:00 AM)

    The lustre and glory of the setting sun
    The freshness and beauty of the spring flowers
    The scary grandeur of the mountains
    The silence of the lonesome lagoon
    The dark majesty of the unlit groves
    The sunlit glades of trackless forests

    again in this cool days I find something makes me prank
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/16/2015 11:13:00 AM)

    It is not easy to paint a real dream in the same spirit just as what the dreamer experienced. Dreams are such. Yet, you did it Madam. Very well done. Wonderful portrait within a poetic frame. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/26/2014 12:55:00 AM)

    A poem of sweet dreams, a romantic one, my favorite topic...............10 (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (12/29/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    , , , a wonderful romantic wrte, , , (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/22/2013 9:53:00 AM)

    on 26th July I have given my comment (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/22/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    The rhythm of a lovely loving heart pulsate here.Two hundredth poem goes to the two worldone of sweet dream and the other is of reality.The flight of imagination is equal to the passion of Kunti, mother of Pandavas who waited for Surya Deva or to the passion of Parvati, daughter of Himavan who meditated the lover Lord Siva, I love this poem much as a madrigal sung in a dew dripping moon lit night. (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (7/8/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    A woman's favourite dream........universal in thought put well (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (7/3/2013 2:47:00 PM)

    What a romantic dream Valsa. I too have had those kind of dreams.
    Most of us have had them at one time or another, we just don't put
    them on paper. I like your style and wording on this one. Nice write.
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  • Valerie Dohren (7/1/2013 11:26:00 AM)

    How lovely and romantic Valsa - you are entitled to your dreams, we all have them. (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    A nice poetic license to indulge in flights of fancy in a wonderful musical poem, Valsa! (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    A delightful dream of fantasy so sexy and sensual that waking as with parting must have been such bitter sorrow. (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (6/26/2013 4:46:00 AM)

    An intensive expression of a passionate dream.I like it's rhythm too.I voted 10.. (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    Valsa-You sure got a beautiful poem from that dream. A passionate, even sensual expressionof love and on a higher level. The fire still burns. So very good -10 (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (6/25/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    Dear Dinesh
    It is poetic license to indulge in such fanciful musing!
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  • Dinesh Nair (6/25/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading the poem though I could not believe it were you Madam Valsa who had such a dream!
    I hesitate to write a similar poem for the presence of many like you over here Madam.
    Joking I am....
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/25/2013 6:00:00 AM)

    In a beautiful verse you described passion and separation. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

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