...Withheld Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

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Rating: 5.0


soaked in tranquillity
a bud, begins to unfold.

shedding its pain,
the night smiles a tear.
and thus some sorrows,
forever remain untold...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Aarella 30 June 2009

crying is the best thing....it clears our heart, then the agony dies, the story gets lost in the vaults of mind! ! ! ! very nice, sensibly thought out write!

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Anjali Sinha 10 July 2009

first the bud and then the flower unfolding a silent process nicely written; -10 anjali (do read mine Michael Jackson-A peter pan)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 July 2009

Finely penned! in short said a lot........10++

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Indira Babbellapati 01 July 2009

unfolding is a painful process, sarvesh...

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Maitreyee Joshi 30 June 2009

sensitive, very sensitive....loved it.

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Priyanka Bhowmick 30 June 2009

lovely one..... i liked it..

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