Without You Poem by sagar patil.

Without You

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without you, did i like this?
how did i live without you?

with your memories, my night passed
the moonlight talk tome about you.
my whole day night are lonely without you
my days are not like days
lonely body, lonely soul, my eyes stay wet
come to me now
i dont want to live without you.

since when are my eyes layed in your path
(i wish) atleast let us meet each other accidently
i cant forget your words
my eyes are wet every second
why should i breath, why should i live
living feel bad
why did u become unfaithful, tel me the
reason

without you, did i like this?
how did i live without you?

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rupika Alekhya 10 November 2012

Vry emotional.. Strikes the heart! M touched... [sob sob...too touchy! ; (]

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Poetheart Morgan 26 October 2012

One love like this you'll never forget! Put then in your heart box and lock it. So beautiful Sagar! ! ! !

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Faith Franklin 22 October 2012

beautiful writing style. i loved reading it

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Samantha Rak 21 October 2012

Absolutely beautiful, sad but beautiful all the same. You did a very good job, thank you for writing this! ! Cheers :)

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Unwritten Soul 21 October 2012

Nice poem with color of gray, gray of sorrow and bursting feeling..you burst it all in your paper.keep it up, thanks for sharing with us_Soul

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Patricia Grantham 11 March 2013

A soul stirring piece of poetry Sagar, It really touched my heart and made me shiver. A good write

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Stewart Gideon 04 December 2012

wow...It's just as if I'm the one saying these words cos there's someone am missing...nice poem

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Cierrah Smiles 01 December 2012

Beautiful and emotional i love it :)

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Ramesh Rai 15 November 2012

sometimes it happens so in life. but i like to remind you the words of bachchan jee in one of his poem. jo beet gayee so baat gayee. but it is not so easy to forget those moments of life. you have expressed with your inner heart.

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Neela Nath Das 10 November 2012

Very nice bhai. Loved the keen desire for a departing soul.You are still staying, in her memory.

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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