Without Your Love. Poem by J.A McManus
Without Your Love.
Without your precious love
I’d be as empty as a drum
You’re my entire world
My stars, my moon, my sun.
Without your precious love
I’d be a lock without a key
You’re my entire world
My waves, my sand, my sea.
Without your precious love
I’d be as hollow as a lie
You’re my entire world
My clouds, my wind, my sky.
Without your precious love
I’d be a garden with no turf
You’re my entire world
My rain, my grass, my earth.
A wonderful piece and had you said You are and added the last line in each stanza it would have been a poem on it's own--10
John this has all the elements of a tender romantic love-poem of the first order - it is a delight to read - - keep writing and warm wishes from Fay 10
Your well placed and chosed words made the poem an enjoyable success..cheers, Patti
Very nice with simple thread that worked really well.
Nice sentiments J, I like the flow and content, very good, 10 Lynda xx
A poem that scan stand on its head for you. It bounces off the page with the rhythm of its reality. A well crafted admission of the depths of love in the easy stages of verse.10.
The flowing of the words is wonderful....it's nice how without her your life would be boring and unbearable but with it the world is a rich and wonderful place to live in. Keep it up
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
3/27/2023 10:05:27 PM # 1.0.0.1112
Your love is shown and its a good job you have her or you would be a nobody with no stars....a poem from the heart regards