Woman Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Woman

Rating: 5.0


Woman
She is painted
in hues most abject.
now that He has
achieved her,
Death rests
at her feet.
does His eyes too
bear a drop or two
of tears for her?
does He feel
bereaved too?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 26 June 2023

Men's supremacy, put in question in a most fair and delicate way. In order not to force a hurtull intervention.

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We live in 2023, not in 1823, when women were ordered by male-all courts to wear a scarlet badge citing "A"…. as life-long punishment for "adultery". The most pertinent question is has the woman sinned alone?

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Sheeya Hacks 26 June 2023

Tough life of a woman nicely portrayed. Full *

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Is woman ‘just a thing, a body' for the exclusive use of man?

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Anjandev Roy 06 July 2023

Simply outstanding.......

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Happy you liked

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 July 2023

I am in agreement with Evelyn TFS

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 27 June 2023

An exceptional, stirring poem.5 stars

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I am happy that you appreciate the poem

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I would like to hear the views of my fellow-poets on the usage of the word 'achieved' in the expression that Death has "achieved" her. I had considered other words like possessed, made (her) surrender, defeated, subdued etc, but preferred this one

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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